Showing posts with label Poem 18. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Poem 18. Show all posts

Sunday, January 19, 2025

Crow's Nest

Faint from explanation,
lolling with the ripples,
knowing that being in a
better place means the 
pressure of it only
permits conciseness,
a compact and precise
look at why you ended
up here, not out of
convenience but
because your chances
of divination are
reduced like that,
the family line 
will only impart 
with every skip 
of the stone
on the water's surface.


Saturday, January 18, 2025

Judith

The article is entitled 

Judith and Holofernes 

(Donatello) and it’s about

the same length as the statue itself.

I was scrolling for inspiration

since I knew I wanted to do 

something with the gilding, how while

it had once covered the whole of the bronze 

widow-assassin and her quarry,

it now remained only on the blade.

It felt like a layup: something about gold

in the place where the blood would’ve run.

Violence, power, lust, karma.


But I was soon derailed by a misreading

of the final word of the opening bit,

‘topos’ not being part of my everyday

vocabulary, of course, meaning

the story was now a representation

of “The Power of Women tops.”

“Yeah,” I could hear the hero say.

“I guess things got kinda carried away.”

What to do with the gold in that case?

The sword’s too obvious a metaphor.

Something about the gleam of arousal,

a priceless performance, true love

and karma, power, violence, lust.