standing in the sun
of incandescent low watt bulbs
a man with foggy eyes said
simply copy the writing you love
transcribe it word for word into
word classes
adverb verb determiner
noun conjunction
verb verb
noun proposition
noun proposition
swap them for new words
and you have a poem
so simple to create systems
for creating desired emotional responses
believing in them is the big trick
shiny buttons on carhartt
pulling over the soft mound
of a big belly
created by pain au choix
and other delights
burned inside the bubble of a sweet
common law marriage
where each pursues their puzzle
mysterious to the outsider
standing under the same sun
listening to someone describe
how beauty grows
so simple to create systems
for creating desired emotional responses
believing in them is the big trick
an interloper interjects with insights
from his own art form
scratching his tiny beard
it's like music
under these vibrating lights
brothers in arms
devising systems
to shape the world
us under the same sun
holding little soggy plates
shifting weight from left to right
orbiting them both
a moon
i’m weighing the options
of another punch
into darkness
together
I love!
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